Sunday, October 3, 2010

Thesis stament

I'M thinking something along this line for my thesis statement, but I'm not yet sure that it is a good one, or a correct one for my category so please comment or make suggestions if you can

Thesis
The two types of planets in the solar system, Terrestrial and Jovian planets, are located in different areas in relation to the sun, have a unique composition, and have different satellites in their orbits due to the planets mass and gravitational pull.
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  1. Laura MarieOctober 3, 2010 at 11:59 AM

    I struggled with this as well because there is so much to fit into one sentence! but this is what i came up with:

    The two types of planets in the solar system, Terrestrial and Jovian planets, are located in different areas in relation to the sun, have a unique composition, and have different satellites in their orbits.

    hope that helps a little (:

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